Can You Hear Me?

just something new i decided to try

are you listening? do you care? are you even still there? why let this happen? she doesn’t deserve this there is so much she will miss she did not do anything wrong so why put her in pain make her suffer till nothing remains maybe you just were not watching didn’t notice this occur and this prayer will make you stir or is this really part of your plan? you just want your angle back the one heaven now lacks but haven’t you taken enough? must you have her too one of my last few who truly make me care about what happens to me if only to see her smiling face everyday and simply hear her say I love you some ask you for power some ask you for wealth some ask you for glory some ask you for strength some ask you for courage some ask you for protection I ask you for nothing I can get by but I ask for her she just isn’t as luck as I

Reviews

[Me]

I think you did a wonderful job on this one. I can truly feel what you were saying. Keep writing.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Wonderful. It's like a story and a poem all in one. I mean , every poem has a story but this one even more so

good!

[Alicia Isabella Lane]

Awwww this is so heartfelt and touching. I love the raw emotion in it. You did a beautiful job with this.