Why Me?

Why Me?

A Poem by Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

Why do you like to hurt me?
Is it fun to watch needles gouge
my eyes out?
Why do you say those words?
Those words that always stab knives
in my back.
It's because you just don't understand,
what it's like for me to be
living in this world.
It's because you don't see my pain,
hidden under my fake laughs and smiles.
Why is it me?
Why don't you choose any other kids?
Is it because you just don't understand?
Or is it because you secretly know?

© 2011 Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff


Author's Note

Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
I know that it's shitty and whiney but whatever lol

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Great poem. I love the last two lines the most.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Not s****y, not whiny, it's better than anything I could ever write. Nice work :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are really expressing true emotion. I give you huge props. I hope if this is true that you get through it. You inspire me bro.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i don't think its as bad as you think it is. this is a good poem that represent what you think.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was beautiful :) just because you show your real emotions doesn't mean your whiney. I could relate a lot. Keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


ahh nah its not s**t well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is beautifully written. It connects well with its readers. The emotion can be felt in each sentence. Its great!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love it, it's not even close to being s****y and I barely found it whiney. Great poem, keep writing more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


S****y? Far from that. Whiney? Definitely, but whining about your problems in a poem gives it more of a little edge to it that seems personal. What's goes down deeper than a writer who lets out emotion with a pen? Not much, I guarantee that, in fact, I think you should rant a little more, it gives it that edge that makes it more original, creative, etc. Great job on this poem, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
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