Obsessed

Obsessed

A Poem by Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff

I have this obsession.
Its the stupidest thing ever.
I have this obsession with this girl.
She's beautiful and smart and owns
the world.
She is so naive and small.
She doesn't try to impress anyone,
she doesn't try to prove herself to anyone.
She's perfect on every level.
But she won't see me.
she doesn't believe me.
I'm a stranger to her,
a freak,
a loser,
a creep.
I'm nobody to her,
but she's everything to me. 

© 2011 Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff


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Hi My Name Isn't Slim Shady. It's Jeff
Yep...

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You must really like this girl, she must either be annoyed or she feels special.

Posted 12 Years Ago


She sounds like a very special person... she may not know it. Give yourself a chance to express that to her. You never know how a person will react...even if she doesn't return the feelings, it is nice to be complimented...friendships blossom. Start with a smile :) NICE Write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


this poem is so sad but it's great with the feeling of having a one sided love....... it's sweet and nice....... I really enjoyed reading this...... ^^, great work...... And I love it.......


~*~ Des Tiny ~*~

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's cute(: personally I really like it, hahaha what with guys liking small girls I'm not against but I never understood it.... I really enjoyed the poem though.
Xoxoxo
Love it
~abbie
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


These kind of things that happen.........................................................................they suck a*s

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it... sad feelings of wanting someone but not being able to have them

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww, sad. I'm sorry... Really good poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Uhm...good poem...I guess

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dear annoyed Gus,
go play in traffic.
Sincerely,
Jeffrey.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dear Jeffrey,
stop writing creepy poems about my girlfriend.
Sincerely,
annoyed Gustavo

Posted 12 Years Ago



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