New Place

New Place

A Story by inconsistentsea
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100 words.

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It's funny how only in the dark do some things become apparent. Everyone's first night in a new place is unnerving, but probably not like this.


What I thought was exhaustion, imagined movement in the corners of my eyes, was a little more real. Noises weren't just results of paper-thin walls, pipes and old floors, but communication.


I thought it would be hard to be on my own for the first time, but this abysmal night proved that I am certainly not alone. And I don't think I will be moving again any time soon. Or so they tell me.

© 2013 inconsistentsea


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JC
I keep reading this and the word "communication is very striking to me, can't put my finger on it, it's late here and I'm total in the room exhausted, feeling that type of supra reality and paranoia...i dig how this leaves so much open...

Posted 11 Years Ago


inconsistentsea

11 Years Ago

Hopefully nothing creepy tries to communicate with you in your state, although it could make it easi.. read more
Oh, spooky! This certainly got my imagination going! Thank you for joining in the "prompt" challenge! ~ Helena

Posted 11 Years Ago


inconsistentsea

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and thanks for having such a great prompt.

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Added on February 5, 2013
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