My box

Inside my box flows the ripple of a river,

A humans heart,

A orange moon

Inside my box blinks a unicorns eye,

Fire from a dragons breath,

A red waterfall

My box is brighter than a stars heart

It is decorated with a moon on the lid

And flowers in the corners

My box is located at the centre of a parallel universe

Where nothing makes sense

If my box is found wars will end,

And the world will be flooded with peace 

 

Reviews

[china]

Thank you for sharing your box with the world. One day I hope it will be found so the world can live in peace. Very nice work and the description is outstanding.

[Alexa Tasch]

very discriptive. i like it! I really says a lot about you too.

[Lilly]

An interesting poem with great images.

[Wolfwind Words]

A wonderful poem! The idea of a sacred object to contains all good is well invisioned with your words. May peace indeed someday spill forth from those special boxes.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[DreamingDingledodie]

if only the world would be flooded with peace, great job Poppy!

[Poppy]

Thankx

[Ruby]

Nice :) I like the end part