Endless Winter

Endless Winter

A Poem by MCS
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Some say "when it snows, you have two choices, shovel or make snow angels." Well I've had enough of both; now I'm just bored and ready for sand castles!

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Waiting for spring


its delayed again


landscape blanketed in white




© 2019 MCS


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i like that this haiku is, yes, a blunt statement of winter refusing to go...but in a different light...
this can also refer to a relationship in a cold state, refusing to warm, the couple finding reasons to remain estranged. You use your words so well in your poetry...nothing wasted...
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


MCS

5 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you for reading. I appreciate the time you've taken to share with me. You're right th.. read more
sorry bout that my friend … even in the best of winters, there is still a 'sucks' factor
snow peas are in ground … the locals are restless
spring will come your way one day, unless a wall, a big beautiful wall, a big tall beautiful wall is built on 'our' common border
it's good to see another of your insightful offerings

Posted 5 Years Ago


MCS

5 Years Ago

Suck factor indeed!
Thank you for reading. If there should be a wall worry not I'll sponsor .. read more
Most would think of our warm California afternoons as: SPRING IS HERE! But this is not what we expect here. The mornings are still frosty & this wimp hates that! (go ahead & laugh) Oh! Reluctant spring . . . your words paint her starkly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


MCS

5 Years Ago

Hello Margie, thank you for reading and sharing. Its just been a hard winter up here in the great .. read more
barleygirl

5 Years Ago

I feel guilty complaining!
MCS

5 Years Ago

Dear Margie don't worry, just enjoy your sunshine :)

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Added on March 31, 2019
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MCS
MCS

Toronto, (GTA), Canada



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