Unkindness

We all die. The goal isn’t to live forever, the goal is to create something that will. ~ Chuck Palahniuk

Unkindness………………..

 

Or absolute cruelty

Behavior so like you

Degrading and meanspirited

 

Right to the end

You measured out your abuse

Yet you died as you lived

 

Alone……………….

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

We are judged by our deeds, and rightly so. An unkind person will win few friends, and not be remembered for anything good. We should all try to be generous of spirit!

[MCS]

I couldn't agree more. Thank you for reading and sharing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Between the quote by Chuck Palahniuk and the weight of your words, I was reminded of a quote by Shakespeare that reads, " brevity is the soul of wit". What a powerful read, dear friend!

[Soren]

A stark harsh statement of life. Short and to the point. Sad yet all too common. Well written and well said. I only hope it does not apply to me.

[Kim S.]

So very nicely said and written out

[MCS]

Beckie, thank you for visting, reading and sharing.

[John the Baptist]

Bitterness overflows this one. Such anger is usually reserved for one close, and I'm wondering in this case if it's a parent.

[MCS]

Hello John, thank you for dropping in, reading and sharing. Yeah, I'm having a hard time putting my feelings in order.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ty Cobb lived like this and died like this.
This poem is universal and unfortunately so....

when it is too late, we rue how we treated others.
j.

[MCS]

Hello Jacob, thank you for dropping in, reading and sharing. Its sad how some make such awful life choices.