The Kissing Gate

You stand on the threshold

and stare, goodbye etched;

on your face, lines that hold

the workings of fate wretched.

Are we the darkness between

two brightly burning flames?

Or just puny pawns

in destiny's childish games?

The wonderless wonder

of dreams torn asunder?

or just another life

that forever went under?

Either way it's time,

today is the date.

Carry on & forth

beyond the kissing gate.

Reviews

[Lloyd Frieson-Small]

Beautiful mastery within this work, you are on your way to the level of unrestrained genius. I see that you cling to the rhyming genre, and while your work is impeccable, you will eventually break away from this genre and immortalize your art form in a genre of your own. Bravo, and continue your journey of mastery..

[Devesh]

Unrestrained genius? :P I'm flattered :D Thanks a lot! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so interesting Devish.I really enjoyed it :)

[Devesh]

Thank you, Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a really catchy poem. You did a good job with it. :)

[Devesh]

Thanks a lot, Madalyn :)

[Erik Daniel]

Very well written. I like it. Great job!

[Devesh]

Thanks man! :D