I like the thoughts and questions in the poem. Sometime sleep lead us to the dark or the light. I did like the closing lines. To fear sleep and dreams would be a bad place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for reading :))
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This poem is written very well. Most people question many things like this right before they go to sleep. Overall I think it is very good much like your other writing!!! Good job
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