Never Alone

Never Alone

A Poem by Devesh

I sit beneath the clouds and look at the sky above, and below as the words start to flow like a game of habit where pearls of glass glint under the moon and not a moment to soon. I see a lamp ablaze in the distance. it tells me I'm not and I'll never be alone, as long as I sing the song of my soul. it's a dark night, but a star shines bright. I'll never be alone, I'll never be alone.

© 2014 Devesh


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This stirred something deep inside me Devesh. Really powerful. The imagery again paints a sharp and detailed picture. I'm still envious of how easily you rhyme in your poetry. I loved this part:

"as long as I sing
the song of my soul.
it's a dark night,
but a star shines bright.
I'll never be alone,
I'll never be alone."

Great Job Friend! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Chelsea! Your reviews mean a lot :))
Konigin

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome Devesh. Any time! :DD :)) ^,^



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Nature provides best company, one is never alone in presence of nature.
What a lovely poem I have found to read when I am sitting under the open sky and surrounded by sky and clouds. You made me feel your words.

Posted 5 Years Ago


We all are truly never alone/ Beautiful job with this piece Devesh!

~Stefanie

Posted 9 Years Ago


"I'll never be alone." This means something to me. I can't really say but I feel it. And I love that. Thank you (brilliant write)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This stirred something deep inside me Devesh. Really powerful. The imagery again paints a sharp and detailed picture. I'm still envious of how easily you rhyme in your poetry. I loved this part:

"as long as I sing
the song of my soul.
it's a dark night,
but a star shines bright.
I'll never be alone,
I'll never be alone."

Great Job Friend! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Chelsea! Your reviews mean a lot :))
Konigin

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome Devesh. Any time! :DD :)) ^,^
This is so great Devesh .I believe that we are never truly alone.Loved this that I did :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
A very uplifting write! It really is a great feeling to know that no matter what we are never really alone. I love this Devesh! Great work here! (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Madalyn! :))
Wow Devesh. A beautiful uplifting poem. Well done sir!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A great feeling indeed that we are never alone in our daily grins, struggles and even contemplation. A wonderful write...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami! :))
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:)..................
I really like this. It's very beautiful, and i really love the flow of it. It's one of those poems that would be lovely being spoken aloud. Wonderful job, Devesh :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devesh

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Brookly! :))

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