Happy Ending

Happy Ending

A Poem by intangible_soul
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I wrote this as an ending to a poem a friend wrote. I cant stand not having a happy ending!!! I need to ask the writer of the beginning of the story if I can either post, or add the link to his writing that inspired me to write this ending. But here it i

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Her breath now shallow, and skin pale blue,
Even time has abandoned, forgotten she fades,
Then the forest parts, the sun pierces through,
Revealing a commoner, with rose and blades,
He cuts the vines, overgrown and thick,
Surrounding her heart, he frees her soul,
Then lowers his lips to hers, now pale and sick,
And kisses her softly, and sweetly, and slow,
Blood red rose brushes now blushing skin,
She awakens with dreamfilled eyes,
And kisses him back, deeply from within,
Her skin now flushed, her heart in joy cries,
As she and her prince, now tangled in fate,
Forever entwined, soul to soul they escape. 

© 2008 intangible_soul


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Added on February 15, 2008

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intangible_soul
intangible_soul

dirty old city, OH



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I like to write but cant honestly claim I am a writer. I put things down on the page purely because it is therapeutic for me. I don't know anything about style, or what a good poem or prose consists o.. more..

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