The Seeker

The Seeker

A Poem by Brandon
"

He's not a despicable character.

"

The dark and cloudy skies
Shield sunlight from his eyes
The seeker sits and hums
His wishes flow like strums

He waits for help that never comes.

© 2011 Brandon


Author's Note

Brandon
Sometimes I feel like this.

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beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".


Posted 12 Years Ago


I can in some ways relate to your words. Help seems like a luxury at times that some people can never afford. I cherish this short write for that truth.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has no flow and it makes no sense

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 4, 2011
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Brandon
Brandon

Provo, UT



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