Once Upon a Time

Once upon a time..

She cared.

She cared about herself,

She cared about the people around her.

She cared about her looks.

She cared about her body.

         But then..

Everything changed.

She depises herself now.

She slits her wrists only to laugh as the blood runs down her arm.

Into her puddle of self-hatred.

She hates the people around her.

She was ugly now.

She was dead inside.

"Don't let me wake tomorrow." She'd pray before she fell into a dark sleep.

"Can I die please?"

"God please. Take me home."

"God," she'd whisper night after night. "I hate you."

      Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl.

       Once upon a time, that girl is dead.

And shes hanging from your cieling.

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Hmmm.... Not the best writing ever. But it was good. There's a couple typos, and there are a few parts that could be changed, but it's okay.

[Denni]

i must say very depressing! but very well written! one or two things i would change but otherwise great!