Feathery Heart

Dear miss lady,

Are you feeling lonely?

It's okay.

Don't hold your breath.

I'm right here by your side.

 

Come on, Baby, open your eyes, I'm right here.

Can you not see me? I see you.

I'm whipping your tears away, but what about me?

I'm still standing ten feet in my own ocean.

Come on baby, smash me with that hammer.

You say it's written in dimonds, but come on, be realistic.

It's in shatters on the ground below your feet.

 

Dear miss Shady,

Come on and face the light baby.

I'll hold your hand, if you hold mine.

Tell me.

Will I ever learn

How to make amends?

 

Come on, Baby, open your eyes, I'm right here.

Can you not see me? I see you.

I'm whipping your tears away, but what about me?

I'm still standing ten feet in my own ocean.

Come on baby, smash me with that hammer.

You say it's wrriten in dimonds, but come on, be realistic.

It's in shatters on the ground below your feet.

 

My heart goes out to you honey,

for he fell in love with a prostitute.

 

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Well I love it!
It's got a rhythm. A nice steady beat to it and a flow that makes it easy to read. It tells a pretty sweet story-- although, not sweet as in sweet, sweet as in cool. Er... it's a sad story. ^^"
I'm rambling.

Point being, I really liked it-- and you did a really good job here. ^^
Hope you write, and post, more!