Diary of a Madman

This is a very depressing poem/song. Everytime I read it I laugh at how distorted and ridiculous it is.

Give up

Give in

I can’t be without your skin

 

Just ignore the smoke

Smile one more time

My love will stay with you

Because it has to

 

Head down

Go to sleep

With your poison devils I’ll keep

 

I’ll take just what I came for

Then I’ll be on my way

Comfort is a mystery

Everyone must pay

 

There will come a day

Where I won’t have to be

Anything to you

But everything to me

Whatever words I say

Screaming through the window

The cancer eats away

I will always love you

 

Decrypt

Over you

Finding a little solace overdue

 

And some peace of mind

Leave the dead to rest
A deer in the headlights

Nothing but hopeless

 

Reviews

[Idioteque]

I thought this was going to be like Diary of a Mad Black Women... fortunately I was disappointed in that sense, haha. I like it though, seriously. When I read this, I thought of someone who is basically a vegetable but still has thoughts racing constantly in his head. For no solid reason he has a vendetta against someone, possibly his previous love, and wants to act on his twisted thoughts but can't. "Nothing but hopeless" I guess threw that in there. Have you written ant music or such to it? You probably could get creative with it and do so.