Pervaded Adorn Shaft

Pervaded Adorn Shaft

A Poem by Irenic

The poem which shrieks what a normal human being wants


Abiding the alchemist’s study

Of a pacifist being vanity

Swaying on the

Land acquainted with

Cascading water

Mixing with the irenic’s verdure,

Whilst punk and delinquent

Repose to manacle, ravish, and palsied the concordine

Pursuing to pervade the despondency

But there is succor, an immortal

Still being hemmed with puissant

To abound the rage for accurst

Of slitting a clad of languishing the grotesque stragglers

That ferry like castaways

With mast and oares

To bring tangy in fishing tackles towards adorn divergent

To forgo the invoice of edifying

That unforeseen by surfeit one who are loathing

And to desecrated and decimating the sighs

Because we have prevailing temptress

Of bringing anodyne

in castellated ale and wine

Owing different patois ,

Clad with restiveness

With certainty and shriek in realm to lurk the petticoats

Sought after in the attaché of nosy executive having bizarre constraints,

Because we want cognition with

Synapse between the

Scamp and stakeholder to unleash

The squandering monetary and to crash

Schafeuden to exhaust with carburetor

And end the debarring of tractor

Who kindle for personage and nosy physiognomy

Because the chrome has a right to have itinerary

And people have to ramble too with grin and queer on the sand

Carding their feet on the serene land

Free from preposterous and vanity

Wrath, averse and snapping; muffling venture with perpetuality

Responsive in the propitiated shaft

That lightens the draft

And it is here and there

Because concordine is here and there

With Aeolian near the verdure

To kindle the irenic in the realm of ale



Especially written for The independence day of my country, Pakistan





© 2016 Irenic

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You have an impressive vocabulary and an imposing voice. I couldn't fully comprehend all of it but it was from a lack of intellect and education on my part, not your writing. reading this reminds me of the first time I read James Joyce I am kind of overwhelmed and inspired by my lack of comprehension.

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much for your kind words!!! Love uuuu
What a great write - full of stanza drama and emotion - Partition was about enabling peace. But after seven decades, this goal is yet to be achieved. Independence day is another opportunity to reflect and make prayers for aa better future … Bless you :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


3 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much for this over-whelming review. And yeah, I agree that still we are in chains des.. read more
Human beings want many things and take many different paths. Some get it and others don't. We should have a vision in life and in business. A very unique poem and take on the subject.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much.............:)
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome.

4 Years Ago

Your poetry need to be read by more people. This is real life, history and needed lesson for me. I believe we must hold our heritage with honor and pride. Home will be always our home. Thank you Irenic for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thank you sooooo much for such kind and motivating words :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Was my pleasure dear friend and you are welcome.

5 Years Ago

I liked the vocabulary used in this ... very enjoyable Independence Day tribute ... nice work.

- William Liston

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

thank you sooo much for your kind words. thank you once again.

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5 Reviews
Added on August 13, 2016
Last Updated on August 13, 2016
Tags: concordine, shaft



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