Do you know

From time to time

they choose to see,

but narrow eyes

keep blinding them...

If you ask me what I love,

I would tell you I don't know,

I'm just feeling so alone

so I sing this little song.

I don't know what will be next,

will I ever get some rest,

will I ever wake from sleep,

dive again in water deep?

I don't know, but all I have

is two cold arms and borrowed legs,

something that connects them all

and the head of screamin' thoughts.

Reviews

[RainDancer1997]

Heartbreaks suck and they can leave us confused and deeply hurt. Never forget what your heart is for and over time and peace you will come to love another. You just have to find your lover with your heart and not your mind. Great write:-) you expressed the confusion and hurt very well

[isus]

thank you!

[joshua deathdealer]

Shew..tell me about it. lol Great rhythm.

[isus]

well thanx

[Baby Ricochet]

Good emotional expression. Keep writing

[isus]

thank you for support!

[Rita L. Sev]

It is the heart that connects them all, though it has been torn... Expressive piece, Isus.

[isus]

thank you Rita

[Lydia Shutter]

Very well expressed. It is not easy to go on after a torn apart relationship, but eventually the wounds heal enough for you to trust again. "two cold arms and borrowed legs, something that connects them all
and one head of screamin' thoughts." How emotive your words are! Excellent. lydi*

[isus]

thank you Lydia :)

[Catherine Frain]

This is very good.

I don't know, but all I have
is two cold arms and borrowed legs,
something that connects them all
and one head of screamin' thoughts.

That part is a good little spurt for imagery.

[isus]

well, thank you :)

[icelandicblue]

I didn't know but you told me in vivid detail:

I don't know, but all I have
is two cold arms and borrowed legs,
something that connects them all
and one head of screamin' thoughts.

[isus]

i'm glad i spread 'knowledge' :p

[SyberRose]

I liked the inner voice of this...nicely done...enjoyed...Rose

[isus]

thank you Rose :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the internal thoughts in the poem.
"If you ask me what I love,
I would tell you I don't know,
I'm just feeling so alone
so I sing this little song."
I like your answer above. Each of us love different things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[isus]

thank you for reading it, its really encouraging to see that someone like your 'poetry'

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm just like you. Reading and learning. We are here to help each other.

[K. Hicks]

I like this... its kinda dark but i can relate :D

[isus]

glad you like it :)