Most Righteous

this is by my friend Keva and me.

My sword killed god

in cinderella shoe,

he fell on ground

and then they called him

devil.

what is the difference between sheep?

-9.

My cat wants to die,

it's fine

Reviews

[Bluefire]

"in cinderella shoe,
he fell on ground"
Suggestion-> in Cinderella's shoe, he fell on the ground"
Anywho~
Nooooooooooo!!!! That's not fine that your kitty wants to die. Dx
I like the way this goes, like a strange fairy tale.

[isus]

i originaly wrote it like that and i don't know why i just change it into this :D anyway, thanx for reading :)

[Bluefire]

It's more unique this way, I guess.
No problem. ^^

[Brook]

Witty, i like it. It's unique, and intriguing. Good job, short and sweet.

[isus]

thanx on reading Brook

[David Scott]

I see a mindset sharp with sarcasm and wit.
I like the last stanza best! Very clever write!

[isus]

thanx for stoping by :)

[Aethereal]

You seem to have done something for God that he’s unable to do for himself, and he's grateful for your service. When you've done everything, and know everything, then existence without a goal becomes a static hell in which to dwell. We enjoy our existence because we’re still learning and evolving. We enjoy our mysteries. We enjoy our naivety. God wants to be us.

[isus]

god is us trough us, everything through everything

[Aethereal]

God worships us for we are the apple of his eye that contains his eye.

[isus]

:D i love this, i wish there is more people like you, with open point of view

[KWP]

i like this very much and the mystery it offers ... a sense of wonder at what exactly lay within the words, like a true art piece ... x

[isus]

those words are probably far too kind, but anyway, thanx for reading, really glad you like it

[Jess]

I don't quite get it, but I do like it for some reason.

[isus]

glad you like it :D it's somehow amusing to me that peolpe like it and they don't quiet know why :D

[Chris]

I don't remember ever reading that God ever said - anything, or personally, or even as an aside... about being invulnerable.

we do so many
things
and don't understand
the why of what we did
- just that sometimes the reason(s)
really weren't ...just because.

Sheep have no nationality
just functionality...
and Cats - well, they're like that
- contrary.

Takes honesty to be a real friend, this poem is filled with it.

Chris

[isus]

i like your view of this, but maybe sheeps have more things than just a functionality :D

[Chris]

That would be hard to gauge because being sheeps they just don't speak up ...ya know?

[isus]

and still they can do some other things like live, die, eat food, s**t, be eaten by worms and some other things

[Chris]

Isn't that the REAL definition of "functionality"?

[isus]

yeah, you're right, now i get it, i'm little stoned now and slow now. but that tells me that every thing that exist have nothing more than just functionality

[Chris]

at least for the sheeples...

[isus]

and i wrote "god",not "God".so it's a,not the god

[Chris]

I caught that...

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I kinda liked the randomness of thought here... but as you say everything has some meaning to the writer and it is up to the reader to find some correlation in their own mind. The forlorn feline made me giggle and for that...i am always grateful! :)

[isus]

well, in every randomness you can find something :) glad you like it, thanx for reading :D

[Ghost of Jupiter]

of corse... :)

[A. Amos]

You made me smile good work

[isus]

glad for that

[Baby Ricochet]

Suicidal cats are such a buzz kill.

[isus]

they really are Ric, they really are