Oh when the sun beat down upon my face

again by Keva and me.

Oh what a beautiful day

In April street

And just by the corner is a

Bicycle shop

Where I'm buying bike

Right now.

So I'm gonna take a ride

under the Sun

in April street

boy, that's gonna be a trip!

Ain't that just swell

Riding my new bicycle

Here, on this sunny day

In April street

Reviews

[Kira Jaye]

I like that it's positive, unlike most poetry I read. :)

[isus]

well, when you are happy there's no motivation or will to write so most of the poetry is dark or something.

[Kira Jaye]

Yeah, I get that. I usually write poetry or songs in order to get out all my negative emotions so I don't lash out at people. But It's refreshing to read something with a nice visual for a change.

[Kasey Miriam]

I really like this. its very up beat

[isus]

thanx Kasey :)

[Brook]

I really like this, it's lovely. My favourite line is
"So i'm gonna take a ride
under the sun,
in April street"

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Blood Ink Diary]

well expressed - depicting a soft and gentle Spring day !
And, the simplicity in your verse is innocently-sweet.
Enjoy the new two wheels ! Cheers

[isus]

hey, thanx on reading, glad you like it :)

[Created to Write]

It's a different kind of poem I'm used to reading. Very creative.

[isus]

i belive it is :)

[Emily]

I like the April street at the end! Well done.

[isus]

thanx Emily