Rain is gonna fall

I'm amazed that

truth is there

for those who stare

and

did you know that

you can sell your

soul for gold

and

once that gold

has bought your

soul,

you look and see

you're nothing

but the dead man.

Without no needs

with heavy thoughts

bended colors

fading anyway..

Nothing to say,

too much to speak,

lend me your eyes,

I'm dead before

the end.

Reviews

[Marissa Fromm]

This was beautiful, I loved it.

[isus]

glad you like it

[Your Teaship]

This was a very beautiful piece. Excellent! :)

[isus]

you really think so?

[Brook]

Very beautiful. Wonderful job.

[isus]

thanx Brook

[Michael Oliver]

The Ancient Greeks had no word for truth - they said that which is not hidden - you have brought it into sunlight - nod nod nod ....

[isus]

those are kind words

[Shaquana Adams]

Wow. A real thought provoking write. I enjoyed!
-QuanaWana

[isus]

glad you like it :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. You definitely touched my soul with this one! Great work! (:

[isus]

interesting :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think this poem could make a lot of people do some deep soul searching.

[isus]

yes they really might..

[Nicole]

I love the structure and the end. Really gets you to think.

[isus]

glad you like it Nicole :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

Nicely portrayed....sometimes in life things are gonna happen the way it should...whether we want it or not

[isus]

i guess that's right

[icelandicblue]

The rain is gonna fall whether we want it to or not. The choices we make decide whether we are protected or standing alone in the cold heart of it all.

[isus]

but will the rain ever fall on Moon?