life

a travel of time a endless road

lead to a track that is close to 100 years old

when it will stop no one will know

a travel of epic adventure thru a time in which history is made

it is your job to make sure it can be tammed from

the time you are born to the day you die

your life is a epic adventure you choose if its a do or die

as you grow your wings expand learning the leasons god has in hands

some will be easy alot will be hard it is your job to be the hero and defeat them all

as you go along in this endless road remember eventually there is a end to this road

with every road there comes pain, love, happiness, sadness, and scare's

everything down this road make you in dispare but this make you in this life

you only get one life so live it to its best and remember a road of travel is very far

but how you take your journey and complete gods task makes you who you are in this which is your life.

Reviews

[John Stussy]

You've captured life's essence really well with this poem, showing how the difficulties we face impact who we become in the end. Each road everyone travels is difficult in its own way, but we have to handle each bit of turbulence, have to hold strong to the very end. Good fighting spirit in your words.