what if

none

what if the sky was a free-way

 

if the world held no tears

 

if the life span of memorys went on for years and years

 

if there was no pain

 

and no more hate

 

as if the worlds were yong once agian

 

if what was pure could remain this way

 

if wars were never caused by the stupidest of things

 

like metals and rocks and trinkets and things

 

if we never judged just cause of skin

 

or religion or speech and such

 

if pain and death were just faded out dreams

 

that"ll be the day

 

what if the sky was a free-way

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Goodbye]

An idealist after my own heart!

Lovely write...

[Ruth]

I have to agree with the John Lennon statement David made! lol
Beautiful work, a steady stream of emotion, would be cool as spoken word!
xx

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

I love this. It's kinda ironic because i was just thinking of writing a poem like this but i couldn't grasp the hang of it... "what if the sky was a free-way" "if pain and death were just faded out dreams" i love love LOVE this lines! Your good at making memorable lines. Great job :)
OH! thanks for the review on fearless it means alot.

[David W Moore III]

Could be incorporated in John lennon's imagine. Imagine all the people...
That's a good thing. Great wishes, now if you can just find a genie, cause I don't know if we can get those wishes otherwise :(

[Molly]

I feel like this should be a song :) Very good point and well put.

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. ah, i can only echo your thoughts ... so true and so profound and so contemporary and so relevant ...

[Cynthia]

if, the imagination on it is wide, and you present a nice idea out!!!

if the world held no tears

I wish that too.
I really enjoy this as you might enjoy your own work, cause this is really nice!