The angelic Cheer

The angelic Cheer

A Poem by Rakesh Roushan
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The smile of the lady is driving me crazy.. so i just tempted it out in sort of a poem

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Her smile so bright
so reviveful
her laugh the ultimate
cure of every pain

She the only one
the girl the angel
who has lighten up
my life once again

She so lovely
so admirable so beautiful
eyes glued to her beauty
ears lend to her words
my heart is already hers
even my mind has also
became a part of hers

She my dream
my grace my desire
is just.................

© 2011 Rakesh Roushan


Author's Note

Rakesh Roushan
I was wordless to fill up the last word.. every beautiful words in the world seemed nothing to that feeling of mine

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Beautiful poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is so wonderful and ever so sweet, yo ought to enter my contest I am having. This is sweet and lovely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's so sweet and I just like it... I agree that there is no need to fill in the blank. It really shows us that you are left speechless and breathless by her beauty

Posted 8 Years Ago


The end of it leaves the reader with this sort of feeling of curiosity as if the beauty leaves you speechless...Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's no need to fill that last part with a word. What you feel is what you feel and words can't express that. A soft poem relishing the feelings toward another. Lovely poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 30, 2011
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Rakesh Roushan
Rakesh Roushan

raipur, chhatisgarh, India



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