U needa Know

I want that you should be aware of what i feel about you .. my love ..

You needa know

how much I love you

You needa know

how much I miss you

I just cant tell you ohh baby

you drive my soul so goddamn crazy

every thought of you 

makes me want to feel you forever

I just can't resist this feeling

as it is driving me thrilling

You needa know

you my love is my heaven

You needa know

with you my love starts my crescent

This is just getting messier

I am starving for you so nastier

I want you all my life

Ohh baby you are my enigmatic soul

Ohh baby you are my breaking dawn

This is for true I love you

You needa know 

I want to be your moon not the sun

You needa know

I have devoted this life of mine to shine yours

Baby whenever you are not here

It feels like so unreal

I bet the world for sure

you are my angelic cheer

and whenever the doom comes

I will be with you there

You needa know

how much I love you

You needa know

how much I miss you

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I love the language and the flow. It sounded more like a song to me than a poem. Very unique writing style for sure.

[Misty_Prophet]

Absolutely wonderful! Damn... She is so lucky to have you write love poems for her :)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This was really cute. A love to be shown to another, to let them know that you care and will be there with them.

"Baby whenever you are not here
It feels like so unreal
I bet the world for sure
you are my angelic cheer
and whenever the doom comes
I will be with you there"

Fantastic!

[paparapapa]

I loved it! You are so whipped my friend. =)) Just Kidding. I can definitely see this turn into a song. Just add some lovely music. :)) Anyway, the feeling that you wanted to show through this poem is simply honest and raw, and that's what makes this poem extra sweet. Keep it up! ;)