And here you come

Hurt by love before, she knows there is no one out there for her, until...and here you come.

And Here You Come  

Jack Ivey

 

 

Verse 1:

 

I was innocent, too naive

He screwed me over, when he said he wouldn’t leave

He gave no reason, I should have known

He didn’t want me anymore, now I’m on my own

 

Verse 2:

 

Maybe it’s stupid, when I cry

He really hurt me, and I don’t know why

Locked the pain inside, and threw away the key

Thought there was no one, out there for me

 

CHORUS:

 

And here you come,

To steal my heart away

After all that I’ve been through

Can it be this way?

You make me feel so good inside

I waited for so long

I never thought I’d ever love again

(Pause)

And here you come

 

Verse 3:                                   

 

It makes me nervous, well I wonder why

Can’t take the pain again, don’t want to try

Told myself I’d wouldn’t, make the same mistake

I’d never, never, ever, love again

 

CHORUS:

 

And here you come,

To steal my heart away

After all that I’ve been through

Can it be this way?

You make me feel so good inside

I waited for so long

I never thought I’d ever love again

(Pause)

An here you come

 

BRIDGE:

 

Can I find the will to even try?

You are there to hold me when I cry

I thought I threw away the key

You unlock the love inside of me, inside of me

 

Repeat Chrous:

 

 

Listen here: http://soundcloud.com/thea-21/02-and-here-you-come

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please enjoy the song, I have included a link.

Reviews

[Toni]

This was absolutley beautiful, very fantastic.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed it. I read you were a music lover and thought you might like it.

[Toni]

I am, I am a music lover. C:
I embrace it.
This was really great

[Jack...]

Thanks again.

[Toni]

You're welcome C:

[Toni]

Anytime you want me to read something, either send me request, which I don't always see, or message me.

[Jack...]

Thank you, I will

[icelandicblue]

Beautiful words to a beautiful song. This was really fantastic! I am truly impressed.

[Jack...]

Wow thanks so much for listening. This is great. I am excited.

[Frieda P]

Hey, this is actually really good. Catchy tune, even the first time you hear it. Love the lyrics, everyone can relate....you have it on youtube? Nice job....enjoyed it!

[Jack...]

Nope, not on youtube. Thanks, it is one of my favorite song I have written. The girl singing at the time was 16. she had asked me to write a Fleetwood Mac-like song for her, this is what I came up with.

[Frieda P]

Ah, you just answered my question....why don't you put it up there and see what happens?

[Jack...]

I don't have a video of it.

[Frieda P]

Slap a bunch of pretty pictures up there, that's what everyone else does...

[Jack...]

Well maybe I will, thanks for the suggestion.

[Frieda P]

Hey you never know, look at those 2 Cello guys, that's how they made it big...

[Jack...]

You could be right...I will let you know if I do.

[Frieda P]

It's always interesting to get people's take on it, if nothing else...

[Jack...]

We'll see. You never know.

[Dalia]

An amazing poem and more than beautiful song ever, the singer is so talented as well, this is a bit different from all your poems, I could relate to it, I loved the last couple of lines where she found someone who could unlock the key to her darkened heart.

brilliant
thanks for sharing :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it and could relate to it. FYI, the singer was 16 at the time she recorded this.

[Dalia]

that is wonderful, great job .

[eglantine]

my favorite part is the pause. Who is the singer? A niece perhaps? Did you write the score as well?

[Jack...]

The singer is a young girl who asked me to write a song for her to sing as a demo, she was auditioning for a part in a musical (which she got), this is what I came up with. I wrote the score and everything else to do with this song. I wrote several songs for her, this was my favorite.

[Jack...]

Oh, thank you for listening.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes the song is fantastic and well composed ....melody is out and out 70s Rock and the woman voices who are they?
Guitar riffs and tight drums....how? live musicians?
good job Jack....bring em on!

[Jack...]

The singer was a girl, 16 at the time she sung this. Yes live musicians.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh nice work then!!

[Emerald Seas]

Wow! Okay, the first one I read of your work and it's THAT good. Fabulous. Loved hearing it on soundcloud, this works - very, very well. I was asked to write a few for songs on a new record for a country singer.... I have no idea how to do it as I have no musical talent. This is fabulous. Favorite :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. A song is a poem with music, only it needs to be structured so it is easy to sing. I am certain you can do it.

[Emerald Seas]

Thank you, I'm trying ;)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow this is amazing what a fantastic song should be a hit.

[Muse]

Well versed. When words can be read freely...then it's a melody that needs to be sung.

Can I find the will to even try?

You are there to hold me when I cry

I thought I threw away the key

You unlock the love inside of me, inside of me


beautiful....

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Marie]

Seems like a really good song. I tried hard to hear it but was blocked.

[Jack...]

Marie, what do you mean it was blocked?

[Marie]

I went to the link you provided--it's gone now--and I couldn't hear the song, though I clicked its play button.