Alphabet Soup

Even the alphabet says I love you if you know where to start

 

 

 

 

Alphabet Soup

By jack

 

 

Around the world I search for you

Before the sun does rise

Creating such a wondrous view

Debuting for my eyes

 

Each moment that I come to share

Facing towards the east

Grabbing hold of everything

However I may see

 

Insisting that you take my hand

Joining in the song

Knowing you will understand

Listening all along

 

Many times I want to cry

Nothing seems to ease

Others tend to wander by

Pretending to appease

 

Quietly I search for you

Reaching for a star

Stating but my point of view

Taking it too far

 

Understand the way I feel

Verify the lot

When will all of this be real

X does mark the spot

 

You alone do take my heart

Zero hour they say

In this poem you will find

I love you starts with A

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Brilliant! creative! 100% fresh ideas. Great Work!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marc

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Mr. Jack :)

[gabrielle]

I went straight to "X" for i was curious and it was great. very creative. i enjoyed reading it!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much, I am happy you had fun reading it.

[Baby Ricochet]

THis was fun to read. Great job

[Jack...]

Thanks so much for stopping by and reading my little poem. I really appreciate it.

[Emerald Seas]

So creative! I love how you've crafted such a feeling within the framework of rhyme and a variation of an acrostic (sort of), Keeping the lines simple, yet flowing very nicely throughout its entirety. It works so well! Great :)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sera, just practicing my ABCs

[Catheryn]

AWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! 8D

[Jack...]

Thanks

[blueholmes]

Owww, so sweet :)) it tickles my young mind and heart . :) love the simplicity and the wonderful message .. i think i'm gonna share your work to my family :)) let the star shed its unending shine :))

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by and read my work. let me know what your family thinks about it.

[pasdepoisson]

Ordinarily, this technique could lend itself to mediocrity. Here, however, you have written an elegantly simple and unforced ode that also charms with its originality.

[Jack...]

Wow, thanks so much

[.......]

Oh wow such a brillant write. I really enjoyed how you took the Z
and returned to start with a A all over again...awesome!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. Just having a little fun and testing my vocabulary a bit

[Salar Majak]

wow!! this is the most creative thing i've ever read in my entire lifeeee!!!!!

[Jack...]

Wow, thank you so very much. You can not even imagine the smile on my face right now. I am very happy you enjoyed it.

[Salar Majak]

:) you are welcome!! this poem has just made my day!!!

[s y e]

Haha, this was so unique and a great idea! It was super sweet.
I was wondering what you were gonna do for 'x' and 'z' but, you done a great job!
I loved it

[Jack...]

Thanks so much...now we have some noodles in this soup too. :)>
I appreciate your kind words and you taking the time to stop by and read.

[s y e]

Hahaha, :") You do :P
Anytime!