I require nothing more

When another is everything

 

I require nothing more

by jack

 

Light my day
Light my world
Light my life
Light my love

Love my words
Love my smiles
Love my world
Love my love

Smile on me
Smile for me
Smile at me
Smile with me

Be my light, my love and my smile

 

I require nothing more

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow!!! OMG! How amazing are you?! This was such a sweet write, I loved the repetition of "Sweet" and " Love"

"Be my light, my love and my smile" - loved that line, it was amazing and so sweet!

A different style but as always, amazing!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my dear sweet friend.

[s y e]

Anytime hun

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely!

[Jack...]

Thanks Neva

[DIVYA]

All we want in the world
Our beloved to have and to hold...

Such a heartfelt prayer, straight from the core.
...I wish you love, light and smiles...with the special one.

Thanks for sharing this endearing piece of your heart!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much dear Divya

[shallimarRose]

outstanding Jack.. loved the form here.. huggs shallimar (Rose)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Rose

[shallimarRose]

I dont have time to spend a lot of time here but you are definitely one I look for to read.. xo Rose

[Veronica Chandler]

This poem warms my heart, lights my spirit and lifts my spirit.
Beautiful...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Veronica

[Androglossia]

This harmony at its best! Simple and implicit:) I liked it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much

[Frieda P]

You're trying new styles, this is very simplistic for your usual thought patterns, it still contains the same lovely message....this was more like the direct route, usually you take me on a journey.

[Jack...]

Thanks Frieda, usually we are riding in the Lexus IS250 Convertible with the top down on a lonely country road, today I broke out the Ferrari and we were in the fast lane. :)>

[Frieda P]

Both an exclusive ride, just a different spin...could you put the pedal to the metal please ;-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You have said it in a few short but exceedingly beautiful lines the way you feel about someone who is your Universe and being part of that someone or she/he being part of you...you need nothing more. You are fulfilled in your existence. You are happiness personified when the Universe or (the one who is the creator of the universe) Lights your day,
Lights your world, Lights your life, Lights your love, Loves your words, Loves your smiles,
Loves your world, Loves your love, Smiles on you, Smiles for you, Smile at you,
Smile with you, Becomes your light, your love and your smile...
and then you know...
You require nothing more...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I can honestly say I think this is the first time the word count on a review far exceeded the word count of my poem. I appreciate your kind thoughts.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

It was really wonderful to read this seemingly simple yet towering epitome of affection...this..your poem.
Thank you again for writing this which may relate to just about anyone who would read....its an "everybody's poem' kinda peaceful peace.
btw Jack did you get the.PNG file i sent to your inbox...the sketches i promised to sketch for all the remaining participants (other than Sketcha who won the first place as as a result a recorded mp3 and minus-one music mp3 of her poem) based on the poems of the contestants of my 7 line poem contest..? I hope you got it and it opens on your computer or else...i can convert into a lower graphic format like .jpg and send....thank you very much for participating in that contest and please accept this small token of gratitude...which might seem like a joke...but is really a jewel of effort just like your poem was.

[Jack...]

I did recieve it and I think I responded to it and if I didn't I apologize. It was a fun little award and I enjoyed the creativity of it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I'm glad you think that way. But no apology required....anyway i did not receive your reply...so i thought you might not have got the award...but now that you say. I am at ease. Still delivering the other 8 awards one by one..

[Emerald Seas]

A different style for you. I enjoyed the light feel, but full sincerity of this short piece. Wonderful thoughts wrapped in a few words!

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend. I figured I would give everyone a break from my normally long winded extravaganzas

[Emerald Seas]

I love your extravaganzas! :)

[Jack...]

Thanks

[Holly Mason]

nice word math truly
light+love+smile=nothing more*)*)*)*)
adorable
thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks Holly, It seems I can always count on you to make me smile.