Sunflower Sunrise

The beauty of the morning spent with you

 

 

Sunflower Sunrise

 

Balmy breezes capture me,

 though struggle I’ll not feed,

sifting on the glowing rays beyond the heather hedge,

walking barefoot,

 senses fly,

 lemonade the tint…

born upon this early morning sky

 

Lantana lullabies,

still a faint offering,

relinquish me of moon fed destinies,

setting me free once more

in the golden sheen of the pristine

sunflower sunrise

 

Soft, a haze does find me in a sphere of intoxicated dreams

swirling about this blue canopy,

this euphoric frame bordering

the tapestries of nature’s happiness

 

On this day wings sprout,

gossamer in saffron flow

from shoulders soft and bliss divine,

perfect of a vision I do long

to harbor near

 

For in my eyes again reflects your beauty

and I touch you…

Your smile finds my heart

as I breath in the majesty of my desires,

thanking the heavens once more

for my blessings

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[AlexValkyrie]

I love it. It was an excellent piece.

[Jack...]

Thank you sir.

[Wesley Dingler]

Very beautiful and positive. It makes me wish I lived near a sunflower field. Maybe a field of russian mammoth sunflowers. Those things are huge. I love when people/poets/artists capture a brilliance in their work, much like bending light. You're capturing brilliance and bending light here, my friend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much. I appreciate your kind words.

[Acucena G.]

BRAVO , EXCELLENT WORK

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Acucena G.]

My pleasure

[Emerald Seas]

What sweet thoughts you express, my friend! The barefoot wanderings captured my attention, but the words flowed over like a blissful breeze.
"this euphoric frame bordering
the tapestries of nature’s happiness"
Lovely imagery and feelings these lines bring forth in the mind.
Good morning, Jack.

[Jack...]

Good morning my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this and hopefully it brought a little sunshine to your day. Thank you so much for your always kind words, for you do bring that sunshine to me.

[Emerald Seas]

You're too kind. I'm slowly breaking free of the Monday "back to work" mind fog... your writings were a lovely break in the morning :) Hope you have a lovely day.

[icelandicblue]

Honestly your words rival nature. This is so beautiful and I so love sunflowers. I want to go to wherever that picture was taken. I also loved Lantana lullabies- it's so beautiful.

[Jack...]

Thanks Blue, I always appreciate hearing from you. I sure hope this one doesn't cause any controversy

[Rita L. Sev]

I cannot tell if you looked at this picture and were inspired to write the poem, or if your poem inspired the photographer to take this picture... absolutely lovely! I cannot wait for sunrise, and only wish I grew sunflowers. Jack, this is such a sweet and uplifting piece!

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much Rita.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Remind me to spend a morning with you, good read.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much

[Marie]

Lovely poem about sunrise...it makes the morning shine...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Marie

[Sami Khalil]

"Your smile finds my heart

as I breath in the majesty of my desires,

thanking the heavens once more

for my blessings."
It is a blessing indeed to read these lovely writes...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami. And good morning to you.

[Sami Khalil]

Good morning back for it is too after reading this beautiful write...:)