Definitive love

How I felt the day I met you

 

 

 

Definitive love

 

 

Violet moons

in lavender skies

Whispers on raindrops

and twilight kissed sighs

Buttercup daydreams

in rose petal white

Define my thoughts

of you on this night

 

Pine cone aromas,

and cool morning dew

Mountain top moments,

a beautiful view

Snow flurry sonnets

and orchids at play

Define my love

for you on this day

 

Butterfly wishes,

blue oceans a' dance

Porcelain passions

and springtime romance

Sweet chocolate visions

of everything new

Define this man

the day he found you

 

      

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kristallo]

My goodness, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. The words are full and aromatic, and so delicately sweet. Such a gift for illuminating the senses, you have, each choice of word is so charming and scintillatingly strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss. This is so heart-warmingly lovely, Jack, in a style that you execution so masterfully that it takes my breath away in each read through. Immaculate. Well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kristallo. Your review is poetry to me, "strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss" That was beautiful.

[Kristallo]

My pleasure. :)

[s y e]

Awwwwahh, this is magnificent, my friend. It's always a treasure to read your wonderful works. Sentencing we can all hold dear to our hearts. Your wording and lovely imagery, the way you write and out your heart and should into it. How descriptive your write is.

Jack, my friend, it's perfection on the net.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you my dear. Your visits are my gifts.

[Kristin Lee]

The day he found you...now that is wonderful. If only all men could express themselves so wonderfully.

[Jack...]

I'm thinking of holding a class. What do you think? Thanks so much Kristin

[Brett Pritchard]

Another gorgeous conjuring Jack.

You real talent for painting vivid pictures with your words.
Particularly where love is concerned.

Very impressive.

BP

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Darkblushedink]

This poem has a powerful sense of creating a sort of aura! I felt what you wrote as if i had been seeing it! You really have a gift! How you used some words like lavender, aromas and passions with other words really built up an atmosphere! Keepit up|!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much. Glad you liked it.

[Darkblushedink]

Pleasure!

[Shivam Murari]

First of all my eye falls on the beautiful and romantic photo and attracts me. The first word 'lavender' syncs with it perfectly and called to read on. And as I go ahead, I'm all fascinated and taken to a different world! Nice poem with great imagery!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Shivam Murari]

ANytime :) BTW, have you not been getting time for checking read requests :P

[Jack...]

I have, but I went on vacation and they really piled up on me. I am getting to them.

[Shivam Murari]

Oh yeah! I noticed that I didn't get many read requests from you the last month. Well vacation or not, RRs in my case keep piling up! :P

[carol burgess romance]

oh I think this is my favorite of yours, the imagary is exqusite

[Jack...]

Carol, thank you so much. you are way too kind to me.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I could be the happiest woman if everything you said defines my man, too.

So sweet of you, Jack. Nice poem!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Dhaye. Your sweet words are my smile this morning.

[Cassie]

Awwww...This is so nicely written. I love

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Cassie.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A true love tribute told in flowing and picturesque words Jack

[Jack...]

Thanks so much John. Trying to give you a run for your money.