Definitive love

How I felt the day I met you

 

 

 

Definitive love

 

 

Violet moons

in lavender skies

Whispers on raindrops

and twilight kissed sighs

Buttercup daydreams

in rose petal white

Define my thoughts

of you on this night

 

Pine cone aromas,

and cool morning dew

Mountain top moments,

a beautiful view

Snow flurry sonnets

and orchids at play

Define my love

for you on this day

 

Butterfly wishes,

blue oceans a' dance

Porcelain passions

and springtime romance

Sweet chocolate visions

of everything new

Define this man

the day he found you

 

      

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kristallo]

My goodness, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. The words are full and aromatic, and so delicately sweet. Such a gift for illuminating the senses, you have, each choice of word is so charming and scintillatingly strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss. This is so heart-warmingly lovely, Jack, in a style that you execution so masterfully that it takes my breath away in each read through. Immaculate. Well done!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Kristallo. Your review is poetry to me, "strung together, like christmas lights on the eve of a first kiss" That was beautiful.

[Kristallo]

My pleasure. :)

[redflutterby]

Sweet visions in this my friend!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Thanks Red. I appreciate you.

[Sami Khalil]

"Define my love
for you on this day

Butterfly wishes,
blue oceans a' dance
Porcelain passions
and springtime romance
Sweet chocolate visions
of everything new"
You define things to the letter and down to its beauty ...Well penned and I like too snow flurry sonnets...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasue...:)

[Frieda P]

'Whispers on raindrops'...what a delicate thought, it's all captivating and lovely. I'm wondering what sweet chocolate visions look like and are they dark chocolate See's visions, since those would be exquisite for sure? Sweet Jack.

[Jack...]

If you want Dark Chocolate See's visions then you got em. Mine were buttercream chocolate visions from the Candy Box in Richwood New Jersey (south). Last year I wrote a poem about their buttercreams and sent it to them. They sent me a box of buttercreams and framed the poem and hung it in their store.

[Frieda P]

Oh wow cool, never had those, but I adore See's dark chocolate.

[Angel]

Your poetry waltzes me down the page...
Ahhh, Sweet Talk..yes, I remember what it felt like to be in love.
Thank you for that.

Fabulous write...well done!

[Jack...]

Angel, I thank you for waltzing down the page with me. I appreciate your kind words. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Snow flurry sonnets... AND Sweet chocolate visions - have you been reading my wish list, Jack?

Rose petals, pine cones, snowfall, butterflies - your chosen images mimic the gentle flow of this piece. Nice!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. I had fun writing this one.