I shall go there with my love

Anywhere with you my love

 

 

I Shall Go There With My Love

 

There’s a meadow in the distance

Golden grains upon the land

Such an effervescent morning

As we walk there hand in hand

 

In the trees the birds are singing

Sunny skies play up above

There’s a meadow in the distance

I shall go there with my love

 

There’s a river by a mountain

Waters blue and crystal clear

So refreshing is its beauty

O’ the sound we love to hear

 

Upon it glistens soft reflections

Of the bluest skies above

There’s a river by a mountain

I shall go there with my love

 

There are horses in the pasture

Frolicking this perfect day

So majestic in their stature

As they run the fields at play

 

In the air their manes are flowing

Cool the breezes from above

There are horses in the pasture

I shall go there with my love

 

There’s a garden filled with flowers

O’ the fragrance soft and pure

Perfect blossoms for the picking

Where we could not ask for more

 

All the colors of a rainbow

Streaming through the sky above

There’s a garden filled with flowers

I shall go there with my love

 

There’s a future that is waiting

Where the days are ever bright

And forever it is springtime

Every scene a perfect sight

 

Where the nights are heaven's answer

Neath the wondrous moon above

There’s a future that is waiting

I shall go there with my love

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Emily B]

perfection, truly, beautiful words

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Emily. I appreciate you kind words.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, yes! I shall go there with my love
I shall go there, I shall go there
We shall walk there hand in hand
Where the heaven is in everywhere...

Perfect imagery. I like the use of repetition of lines. Nice pic. Excellent word choice and rhyming.

Just so amazing!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Dhaye.

[Brett Pritchard]

Ah the beauty of love and all it's promise.
perfectly capturing the good side of love.

Lovely writing Jack

BP

[Jack...]

Thank Brett, I appreciate it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as a couple in love, there are such places we can walk to that will take our breath away...


this reminds me of being with someone, and just thinking.."i don't care what we are doing, even if it is nothing--as long as i am doing it with you"

another beauteous love poem...your stamp on it.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Jacob

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and light piece, well done.

[Jack...]

Thank you Thomas

[Doug]

This is so sweet and harmonious. When reading this I feel hope, it's so amazing how writing plays with my heart.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Doug

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a prologue to a love story that ends "And they lived happily ever after." Lovely - keep singing these sweet, romantic songs, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Rita for your kind words.

[Frieda P]

Just so happens a very old song came on just as I was reading this, Billy Holiday's, The Very Thought of You....geez, your poem just made it ten times better, you've done it again my romantic poet....just blissful, can't say more. Another sigh on the page.

[Jack...]

I am collecting Frieda sighs in case you didn't know. Thanks for another one to add to my collection. So happy you enjoyed this my sweet friend.

[Dean Kuch®]

Such a romantic soul you are, my dear Jack. This was exceptional, it flows like silk! Well penned and lyrically stunning. The rhyme, the presentation, all so beautiful. It sounds like a place I would sure like to take my love, a 'heaven on earth, if you will.

Breathtaking...

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Dean. I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Dean Kuch®]

You are welcome, jack. hey, who is this Jack fellow people keep claiming me to be? People here are so quick to jump to conclusions. I have already been blocked by several here because they think I'm this Jack character. Do you know of him? Let me know, OK?

[Jack...]

For some reason I think it is me. The only person I have been blocked by is the one accusing me of being you, or you of being me...it gets so confusing at times.

[Dean Kuch®]

People need to chill around here, so friggin' paranoid, huh?

[Jack...]

Sure seems that way to me. I promise, I will try not to offend anyone while disguised as you.

[Dean Kuch®]

:) Hey, if people can't take an honest opinion or critique, they'd better just put their pen away now because once agents and publishers get ahold of them, they'll be a blubbering wreck. lol!

[Jack...]

Don't I know that.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah Jack you lover boy you! Shakespear and Burns would be humbled by this beauty!

[Jack...]

Thanks John. Just trying to keep up with you. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No competition. You are a technical poet I simply a travelling minstral.