Deep in my heart

 

Deep within my heart

 

 

Oh so weak, I lift you by delicate wings,

gently as to not smear the wonder

that does meet my eyes

 

Softly you rest in my hand,

exploring my skin,

the lines of my life, crooked and scarred

 

Tiny feet dance

tickling me with wonderful sonnets,

penned by nature herself

 

As if you can see

my intentions are pure,

for I long to bring you joy, which you bring me

 

A sweet fragrance on the wind

rhymes perfectly with your mesmerizing luminescent colors,

shimmering in the morning sun

 

Spread your wings my little friend

for I have planted you a garden

filled with the nectar which you desire

 

And I will sit and watch

silently as you float, happy and free

amongst the beauty that grows for only you

 

Deep within my heart

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Hana Saemon]

i know it describes a butterfly if we look at it at face level, however, this connects to me in a deeper way. i feel as if this is a piece written for someone under the writer's care, like a child, or a lover. i really do love the message and the flow. great piece!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Hana for the kind words. It was written for someone special to make them smile for the moment. Not a child or a lover, a very good friend who was in need of a little happiness. Thanks so much again, I really appreciate you stopping by.

[Hana Saemon]

love this! keep writing! i hope your muse enjoyed your writing as much as i did :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Love the way that you describe the butterfly...the transition between your hardened, lined, hands and the delicate tiny feet of the butterfly--beautiful contrast.

Also, I found a little pang of saddness when the butterfly was set free, but then again, this was just a beautiful moment in time that was observed, enjoyed and then written in your signature delicate and sublime fashion. Great overall metaphor in this... Lovely, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sarah. Your comments are always a highlight of my day. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my work.

[TL Boehm]

both in love and in butterflies - gently handled brings such beauty
A wonderful poem.
Just doing a run by your page today - I'll be back a bit more this weekend.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Tammy, your smile is always welcome on my page.

[prachi prangya agasti]

a very nice poem indeed beautiful meaning... and heart touching... loved it...

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[eglantine]

Inspiration often feels like this :) Thanks for sharing

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[eglantine]

Sorry I've been kinda absent on here--been so busy!

[Jack...]

No problem...like a beautiful rose, you bloom in the garden and then disappear for a while only to bloom again at another time.

[eglantine]

:D that is gonna be my fb status lol

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem jack

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sir.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

So sweet. So blessed that little friend whom you have planted a garden for from deep within your heart...

Glad you're active again, my friend. Your poems are really amazing. Keep it up.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Dhaye. I always love when you visit for a while.

[icelandicblue]

There is such a beautiful delicacy in your words. There are a number of emotions that course through this and I love the protective nature of the imagery.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. I hope it brought a smile to your face.

[Emily B]

thank you for the garden of words

[Jack...]

Thank you for reading Emily.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Jack. A lovely write and presentation. A butterfly, such a graceful yet delicate creature. You capture its beauty and grace superbly in this piece. Vivid imagery and descriptives. Good flow and tone. I especially like the metaphor of these lines:

"Tiny feet dance
tickling me with wonderful sonnets,
penned by nature herself"

Lovely depth of feeling. Touching. You express joy in this beauty that you care for and protect. You're tenderness and loving nature permeates this piece. Excellent closing lines. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Jack...]

Thanks Shelley, I truly appreciate your always kind and flattering comments about my work.

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome Jack. It's well deserved. You are a talented poet and I enjoy reading your writings. Take care and have a great day!