My thoughts

My thoughts

A Poem by Jack...
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I think...

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My thoughts

 

My thoughts are what I’m thinking

My thoughts are all my own

I think the thoughts I think I’ll think

And think them all alone

 

The thoughts I think are constant

I think them day and night

Because they are not what you think

That does not make you right

 

My thoughts sometimes are happy

At times I think they’re sad

Thinking ‘bout them long enough

I think will make me mad

 

I think in many colors

I think in grand design

I think you think I’m crazy

You think I lost my mind

 

My thoughts are thought provoking

I thought you’d find that fun

Sometimes I think I’m thinking

I think sometimes I’m done

 

So think about this poem

And lessons it hath taught

I wrote it so you’d think a bit

At least that’s what I thought

© 2013 Jack...


Author's Note

Jack...
I was thinking you were getting tired of all my sad and sorrow filled poems, so I thought I'd give you a break.

Thank you for reading...I think.

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I think ,you think,the thoughts, I think !
And thinking you are right :-)
Great job with precise execution!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
"I think in many colors

I think in grand design

I think you think I’m crazy

You think I lost my mind



My thoughts are thought provoking

I thought you’d find that fun

Sometimes I think I’m thinking

I think sometimes I’m done"

Fun and wit at its best...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed this
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did...You are welcome...:).....................
this is so much fun...reminds me of george carlin's skit about God...

"he knows everything, he knows what you think, he knows what you thought, he knows what you think you think you thought even before you thought it!"

clever, Jack

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob, sometimes I think too much.
hahahah this one is quite witty, you think the thoughts you think

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sunshine for your always bright and cheerful comments.
Thinking about thinking-metacognition always fun. Yes, a diverse little poem, this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

You think? Thanks so much my friend.
Your thoughts are absolutely delightful ....they speak directly to my heart, on the deepest levels! Our thoughts are our treasures...they belong entirely to us...and that alone makes us special. There's no right or wrong. An absolute pleasure to read. thank you for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words today. I appreciate you stopping by.
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I think I thought a thing or two while reading what you think of thoughts, at least I thought I did. I ove this Jack and the way you think. Thanks for the smiles and sharing your thoughts. I'm done thinking, it's starting to hurt.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

I think you're right, I might have to turn it off for a bit. Thanks so much my friend for stopping .. read more
ONLY YOU Jack.... can write such a piece and make it poignant and humorous simultaneously......I like the way your mind thinks..
.....You have a rare and awesome poetic voice...truly unique ...you smile my heart :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet friend. Sometimes I think too much so I thought I'd unload a bit of it he.. read more
I think the way you think is very thoughtful...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking that way. Thanks Marie.
I think you have the right to think any way you want. I think you create thought provoking poems whatever you choose to write about. This was a fun tongue twisterish sort of piece. Angi~

PS: I hope you are having a good day today. If you aren't, just think about it, will ya? xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

I'll think about it...I think.

Thanks so much my friend.

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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