Fool Senryu

 

 

What fool on the hill?

If you look close you will see

I stand on flat ground

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Frieda P]

So you do Jack, so you do...I was going to say pfft and pssh, but you're much too clever my so NOT foolish friend.

[Jack...]

Frieda, my sweet poetic friend, we can all be fools at times and I can be the biggest, but I do try and learn from my foolishness. Thank you for always lifting me when I feel I have fallen.

[Cassie]

hahahaha.....very nice, you fear heights that much

[Jack...]

Amongst other things. Thank you Cassie.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes it is just good sense to keep your feet flat on the ground.Well penned Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so clever...i hate heights, but alas, that makes me a fool on flat ground too.

jacob

[Jack...]

At least I am not alone. Thank you Jacob

[Belle]

Now, this reminded me of the fools in the royal's court.
I'd rather listen to the story of their juggling skills,
than be fooled by the fancy mouth walks of the wise on the king's table..

[Jack...]

Thank you Belle

[Jack...]

"Christopher Columbus" related Jack? :D 1492?
Anyhow, that is what you made me think off...
Fool or not, I think nobody is a fool, but us....
To think of the foolish fact we are fools...
We should just love, trust, and have more knowledge...

Then that flat ground is so whole again.

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you Elisa

[Pryde Foltz]

ahhh … yes took a bit for that one to SINK in. Very clever, Jack.

[Jack...]

Thank you Pryde