Thinking of you

Thinking of you

A Poem by Jack...

 

Thinking of you

 

Frozen in layers of lemon drop frosting

Running for love on the snow covered lawn

Interest in all that this morning does offer

Entering each as if only a song

                           ~

Dancing to dreams on the edge of tomorrow

Asking a question I hope will be true

Pausing a moment to glance your direction

Writing this poem while thinking of you

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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Usually I quote parts of poems that I really like, but if I did that with this one, I'd just be quoting the whole poem. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Brittany. I appreciate your kindness.
// Frozen in layers of lemon drop frosting
Running for love on the snow covered lawn //

How I wish it were snowing over here... This is such a beautiful poem, my dear friend. It says so much with in only 8 lines, you always blow me away!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my cute friend. More fun now isn't it?
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How lovely..."lemon drop frosting..."

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

It's delicious my friend. Thanks so much Marie.
Lemon drop frosting, so sweet Jack, simple words with lots of impact, brought a huge smile to my heart this morning!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Frieda for walking along with me while my mind wanders. I am always smiling when you .. read more

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Jack...
Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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