~Silver Thread'd Divertimento~

 

 

 

~Silver Thread'd Divertimento ~

 

Watching a swaying Chinese lantern

in colors the shade of your smile

Paper laced dreams in curvature shapes…

suspended silver threads…

 

Ripples of koi pond whispers

slowly beckon in moonlit gestures,

as we sit counting fireflies,

hypnotized by our beating hearts

 

Cascades serenade,

enchanting the evening divertimento

Lotus blossom fingertips softly

caress parted lips…smooth

 

As I drink of your fragrance,

tasting the flavors, your moistened touch

simmering upon each breath…

warm, offering a honey’d embrace

 

Gazing longingly upon porcelain skin,

tempting star shine glow…

we melt as one, mouths entwined

drenched in serenity

 

while deep within our silence we speak,

not of voice…but of love

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Thank you Frieda for the beautiful music suggestion.

Reviews

[Shirlena]

I'm coming back to read this one Jack...I got started and now gotta run. Just wanted you to know.

[Jack...]

It'll be here my friend.

[s y e]

Thanks to Frieda Dax Johnson is my favourite artist now, I adore all his songs. He was uber talented, like you Jack.

You took my breath away with this one and blew me away... I am truly stunned at how amazing this is, all your magnificent but this one is by far my favourite.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Sye. I truly do appreciate you and the kindness you always show me.

[DIVYA]

Unbelievably beautiful and tantalizing! Thanks for this special read!

[Jack...]

Thank you Divya for your sweet words today.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This was breathtaking. Amazing job here, Jack. You always make me smile.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Brittany. Happy you enjoyed this one

[redzone]

yes, sometimes we speak only in "lotus blossoms finger tips.... smooth".. speaking in, with, by, love, usually a good way to speak.. enjoyed muchly Jack... ~~redzone

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Curt. Thirlled this one caught your attention. I appreciate your kindness.

[kublakhan27]

A gorgeous piece on so many levels my friend. I imagine a serene environment here, with the soft lights of Chinese lanterns, serenading cascades, honey'd embraces, just to name a few of the sensuous mental pictures that this piece evokes. I love water imagery and I think it suits the mood herein to a tee. You always have a knack for just the right image to match up with your moods and settings. A lovely and romantic ode-esque poem...nicely done Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my good friend. The image was provided by a mutual friend. I appreciate you stopping by today and leaving such kind words for me. Your reviews mean a lot.

[Marie]

Your iages are always so exquisite..."paper laced dreams" is a lovely phrase, a lovely description of dreams to hope for...

[Jack...]

Thank you Marie. I appreciate you always being so kind to me.

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply breathtaking...beautiful Jack :) x

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Tia. Happy you enjoyed this one.

[Ruth]

Such a beautiful motion throughout this Jack and god yes, the music, wow....sublime, both the poem and song xx

[Jack...]

The music was uggested and provided by a friend. Thanks so very much Poppy. Your visits are always my smiles.

[Lyn Anderson]

Were you going for syrup there? Romantic imagery.

[Jack...]

Maple, from Vermont...yes ma'am. Thanks so much my friend.