A Genuinely Pleasant Surprise

A Genuinely Pleasant Surprise

A Poem by Danny Mehmedi

The bitter irony...
To think,
That stubborn you 
of all people
Would be the one with the strength 
to say it's really all over
and meant nothing
and carry it out
And me
Too addicted to pain
not to slit my wrist crossways
with memories and old ghosts

It's a genuinely pleasant surprise

© 2016 Danny Mehmedi


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This is a very painful piece. You can feel the agony and heartache. Great Job, thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Danny Mehmedi
Danny Mehmedi

Phoenix, AZ



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