Gone?

I stand by a tree, waiting

For her to come stand by me

The wind whistling

The snow glistening

Then i start to wonder, is she really gone?

I go sit on her lawn

While i look in the house

I realize, theres nothing in there,

Not even a  single mouse

I will forever remember the day

My best friend moved away

Reviews

[melissa]

nice piece:)

[Diego]

I think just about everyone has been here before. Sometimes I've been the one who moves. The emotion in the poem pours through with each line coming to its climax with the very last line. Great poem!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sad poem. Its a nice piece. The scenery you set is great.
"I stand by a tree, waiting....For her to come stand by me"
I really liked these lines. You played with the concept of time wonderfully.