We Walk As One

Walking on the mountian tops with you
Our spirits soar as the eagles on high
Holding your hand as the wind blows strong
I feel the world surround me and I sigh

Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy

Walking in the valley with you
Fearing nothing as long as we are together
Our footsteps echo to each other
As one with the love that we share

Walking across heaven with you
Dancing as the celestial chorus plays
A symphony of eloquence
As forever we sing in sweetest harmony

WE WALK IN LOVE AS ONE ....................

Reviews

[Babbette Francis]

I agree with Beautifully Tragic- You two do work beautifully together.

Walking on the sea shore with you
Making love with the passion of the waves
Kissing your sensual lips so tenderly
As our love swells to a crescendo of joy

Wow! Thats not all I felt about this but its all I feel safe with saying. WOW!!!

[Brianna Brie]

This one reminds me of God. Love evermore. Wonderfully done.

[V. K. Harris]

Love everlasting, Beautifully written.

[Dan Woolley]

This is a beautiful. it makes me so appreciative of my girlfriend
what an amazing journey
Very well written

[Catrinka]

As Randy Jackson would say on American Idol, "that's hot baby!" Another one for your collection Phil!

[R J Askew]

Can't fault a word of this which paints a wonderful ideal of love.

[Fantasyfairy]

Ahh, how beautiful. SOmething tragic, yet omething beautiful and perfect. Well written. XX

[Isaiah Jay]

Very pretty.

[Sqeaver]

Beautiful poem. I like the imagery here.

[Gary H]

Great work you two. Indeed I get the feeling that you do 'WE WALK IN LOVE AS ONE ....................' Such wonderful sentiments in this really warm the heart.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem, you work well together, great imagery