A Ladder To Heaven

A Ladder To Heaven

A Poem by Jaydeskye
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This is the 1st song I have written.

"

Chorus:

 

If a ladder reached up to Heaven,

I would climb it to the sky.

I would look in wonderment,

at those things that fly.

I would find you,

and the sun would shine in.

I would take you by the hand,

and take you home again.

 

Verse 1:

When you went away,

you really broke my heart.

A family that had been so close,

was missing an important part.

No longer would we laugh together,

there were times that we would cry.

To the one who had always been my angel,

you now reside in Heaven high.

 

Chorus:

 

Verse 2:

You will always live in my memories,

my love I could never deny.

Even as I grow older,

my love for you will never die.

Forever you will be my angel,

I loved you from the very start.

Although you live in Heaven,

you will always reside in my heart.

 

Chorus:

If a ladder reached up to Heaven,

I would climb it to the sky.

I would look in wonderment,

at those things that fly.

I would find you,

and the sun would shine in.

I would take you by the hand,

and take you home again.

© 2008 Jaydeskye


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Thank you for submitting this to the Ladder to the Sky contest. I have never read a song on this website, and I enjoyed reading your submission. I think you did a good job expressing emotion to the readers in a way that they will easily understand. My only question about this song is this: is there something missing after the second "Chorus:" between Verse 1 and Verse 2? Or is Verse 2 the second chorus? I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This was really good(: amazing actually!! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was really almost personal to me because someone who I loved died not long ago. I really get the emotion put in it and it was beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Amy
Wow...really good song. I could so hear it being a song...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


That's some beautiful stuff. I can totally hear it in my head, and not in the crazy way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like this song, it came from right from the heart

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is so amazing! I love songwriting and this is the best song I ever heard. Thanks for sharing this.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


This piece really touches me, as the emotions in this are quite personal for me. It's very beautiful. I can hear the words being sung in my head. Great work!

-Howl

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome you had me snaping my fingers, a total pleasure to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could feel the sadness and the longing to be with the one they really loved. Though, it made me feel sad, I like your song.

Good job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful, sentimental...
reminds me of my "Angels" in Heaven, too.
Good Luck in the Contest!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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