The saddest people

I am

sad

lonely 

depressed

confused

miserable

bruised

broken

ready to give up

about to cry

fine

They never read between the lines.

Reviews

[Tim]

I have read some of you poems now and think they are all really good but this for me was the best one as it could mean many different things to different people, i can offer litany technique advice but nearly encouragement to keep it up because i really like them !!

[richieb]

People are not born feeling sad and depressed etc...... Life is hard and throws a lot at us causing our reactions through our emotions. We need to give each other a break and understand there is a story behind our behavior. You said that in less words then it took for my review. Good job Maura. Richie B.