f**s

the ednless f*g

 

endless f**s 

endless smoke

endless words
all up in smoke 

words 
really aren't that deep

too many
too few 

depends on your point 
of view

bit like poems

or is really all about flesh and bones

skin 
skinny like poems 
fat like 
poems

angry
or miscellaneous
poems

nature 
like 
you and me

erotic
with an xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

your broken red shoes 
red 
ruby lips 
to kiss

that political 
kiss
that sends you to war 

oh that's 
lovers

endless tragedy

that has no words 

only noughts
graveyard 
of words 

masonry
carved into endless thoughts
of the tragedy of the
words on endless 
highways

Too many f*****g words 
way too many poets 

still I wait 
for your comment.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Funny how words can change. When I was young. I like a good cigar and a cold beer. Nice flow of thoughts led the reader to interesting thoughts and places. Never enough Poets. Gather poets, writers and musicians together. Government think there is a revolution. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A diturbing and elegant piece really, well done.

[jdking]

ok I found it thanks for you taking time to read, I like elegant.

[jdking]

just wondering which part you find disturbing?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

My spelling is horrific, deturbing! was the word!

[jdking]

I wasn't really into the spelling I was more interested in what you were thinking

[jdking]

I remember as a 18 year old or was I 29 when I read "The Queer Fellow " by Brendan Behan he smoked loads of f**s as did Henry Miller . Did yer man who wrote 1984 I'm not sure ...........?????????????????????/
Thanks for comment its really hard to get one on this site so much appreciate..........jd

[s y e]

Quick question, were you trying to rhyme?????

[jdking]

a moment of streams like thoughts, that ended up trying to rhyme. Thanks for comment.jd

[s y e]

Oooooh okay! I see, I just didn't know, cause some lines rhymed and others didn't.

[jdking]

I know what you mean