"Together"

at times what we need most ......... a smiling face a caring fellow........ and moreover its only god who looks beautiful alone!

Those eyes, full of care
they do,visualise the hidden fear
that smile in the breaking moments
as if hope rings a bell,near my bonnets
walking the journey of dreams
and hiding,the succumbed screams
the aroma of togetherness as if an essence
how beautiful, can be someone's presence
the plans based on insanity
hope is not the child of vanity!
a mighty, heavenly unicorn accompanies me
he makes me fly,for the greatness underlying to see
how blessed am i to be in the company
lucky like me are few, out of many!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

we really have angels in the form of humans!

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

This was creative and I love the author's note!
And yes, I also believe we have angels in the form of humans. It gives a new meaning to the human race.

[junaid altaf]

thank you

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Very true.... Angels in form of friends and family.....
Junaid Bhai.... yaar aap nay to phod hi diya..... Jenab warya asal....
I really liked it... especially this line: "hope is not the child of vanity"
Keep rockin bro!

[junaid altaf]

haaay jenab shukriya...........aap ko achha laga is say badi baat kya ho sakti hai......

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

I'm honored.... :)

[junaid altaf]

so m i

[WingsToFly]

beautiful write. Thanks for sharing

[junaid altaf]

thank u

[Frieda P]

Rings true to 'no man is an island', it's hard to thrive whilst in isolation. Having a friendly face or warm touch is that which makes us all human. Nicely pen'd.

[junaid altaf]

thanks frieda