LIFE

this sudden reality of life makes us feel the taste of its basic fundamental and that is uncertainty and pain and then it makes us beings who live in the sea of compromises and sacrifices......

life begins with a cry

and days start flying pass by

we with our innocence and dreams

step into the worlds realms

life then was sugar sweet

everything was bright like a white sheet 

days were fun, brightest was the sun

life was at ease, there was no run

seasons changed their course,so did life

the bright and innocent left in a strife

everything changed in a wink

as if someone erased it all in a blink

days now seem so dark

desperately in need of the noah's ark

all sweet, bright and sugar gone

changed into something bitter and torn

inspite of all this there is still peace

somehow the dark could not take away this ease

there is still something providing life its dope

which is nothing but the candle of hope

it is burning though its flame is at low

but certainly there is something you know

that the flame will keep burning and bright

till life finds love and hope to its right

junaid altaf

Author's Note

happiness is the name of the adaptation towards pain and despair.......and hope is the soul of life............

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The hope is still aflame... that notion fills my heart with joy, Junaid...

Such an uplifting write.. well done!~xoxo~:)

[Rachelle]

One will never know true joy and happiness unless it is contrasted with pain. Life presents its challenges for our spiritual selves to grow. And though, pain and despair is inseparable from the experience, we have to shift paradigms in order to view it as an opportunity to better ourselves instead of plunging into a deep pit of self-remorse.
The wheels of life turn and what may be down now will eventually go up at some point in time. The challenge here is to last and survive in order to see the morning after the storm.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is very deep and emotional.
This was a very interesting view on life.
I loved the way it flowed and the rhymes :)
Great job

[junaid altaf]

thank you cimmy

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome anytime :)

[Tina Louise UK]

A beautiful piece..enjoyed :) x

[junaid altaf]

thank you tia

[Shaquana Adams]

"days now seem so dark
desperately in need of the noah's ark
all sweet, bright and sugar gone
changed into something bitter and torn
"

Beautifully written :)

[junaid altaf]

thank you adams

[The dark story]

loved the flow and flame of the poem, the reality of our life being penned down elegance. i like that optimism in the last two stanza, very inspiring. thanks for sharing.

[junaid altaf]

thanks atiba

[one sky]

Very inspiring thoughts about the realities of life.
Nice rhyming scheme. Thanks for this wonderful piece, Junaid. :)

[junaid altaf]

thanks marg................

[Blank]

What a positive outlook you have, that's wonderful. Very nice.

[junaid altaf]

thanks v c

[Maggie]

I think my favorite line is about Noah's ark...beautiful imagery to describe a world in sorrow

[junaid altaf]

thanks megan..........

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Love the flow of this poem.Greatly done anf your words are of great meaning

[junaid altaf]

thank you