LIFE

LIFE

A Poem by junaid altaf
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this sudden reality of life makes us feel the taste of its basic fundamental and that is uncertainty and pain and then it makes us beings who live in the sea of compromises and sacrifices......

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life begins with a cry
and days start flying pass by
we with our innocence and dreams
step into the worlds realms

life then was sugar sweet
everything was bright like a white sheet 
days were fun, brightest was the sun
life was at ease, there was no run

seasons changed their course,so did life
the bright and innocent left in a strife
everything changed in a wink
as if someone erased it all in a blink

days now seem so dark
desperately in need of the noah's ark
all sweet, bright and sugar gone
changed into something bitter and torn

inspite of all this there is still peace
somehow the dark could not take away this ease
there is still something providing life its dope
which is nothing but the candle of hope

it is burning though its flame is at low
but certainly there is something you know
that the flame will keep burning and bright
till life finds love and hope to its right

junaid altaf

© 2013 junaid altaf


Author's Note

junaid altaf
happiness is the name of the adaptation towards pain and despair.......and hope is the soul of life............

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The hope is still aflame... that notion fills my heart with joy, Junaid...

Such an uplifting write.. well done!~xoxo~:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


One will never know true joy and happiness unless it is contrasted with pain. Life presents its challenges for our spiritual selves to grow. And though, pain and despair is inseparable from the experience, we have to shift paradigms in order to view it as an opportunity to better ourselves instead of plunging into a deep pit of self-remorse.
The wheels of life turn and what may be down now will eventually go up at some point in time. The challenge here is to last and survive in order to see the morning after the storm.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is very deep and emotional.
This was a very interesting view on life.
I loved the way it flowed and the rhymes :)
Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thank you cimmy
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

your welcome anytime :)
A beautiful piece..enjoyed :) x

Posted 8 Years Ago


junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thank you tia
"days now seem so dark
desperately in need of the noah's ark
all sweet, bright and sugar gone
changed into something bitter and torn
"

Beautifully written :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thank you adams
loved the flow and flame of the poem, the reality of our life being penned down elegance. i like that optimism in the last two stanza, very inspiring. thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thanks atiba
Very inspiring thoughts about the realities of life.
Nice rhyming scheme. Thanks for this wonderful piece, Junaid. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thanks marg................
What a positive outlook you have, that's wonderful. Very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thanks v c
I think my favorite line is about Noah's ark...beautiful imagery to describe a world in sorrow

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thanks megan..........
Love the flow of this poem.Greatly done anf your words are of great meaning

Posted 8 Years Ago


junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

thank you

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srinagar, north kashmir, India



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