KITTENS

KITTENS

A Poem by jen -- JG
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First cinquain I've written for contest

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Cinquain 1

 

Kittens

 

Kittens

Innocent, sweet

Playful joyful actions

Bring delighted smiling laughter

Fulfilled.

 

 

©Copyright jen-JG - 6 February 2009

© 2009 jen -- JG


Author's Note

jen -- JG
As always honesty works wonders - first one of these I've tried to write - does it work - does it need improvement - tell me what you really think - all comments welcome- thank you

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My little Dorothy is like that. She is innocent, sweet, playful and makes us happy. I liked to write something about Dorothy but you did it before.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I have two cats. One is 9 months old. She is a trouble maker. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dear Jen,

Another masterful write. You've worked well within the contest confines on this one to produce an interesting poem. I love cats. I currently have 13. And yes those kittens are so innocent and full of life's joy. You've captured their personalities quite well.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes it does work, beautifully! Well done, its up there with the best Jen!
Bravo! Thank you for entering this delightful cinquain to my contest ! ~ Helena :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not a expecialist (in any form! and i'm also trying them for the fun of it!) but in my opinion: it works very nicely and it is LOVELY!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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jen -- JG
jen -- JG

Melbourne, Australia



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I enjoy reading, writing and watching movies. There are two adorable cats in our household who give us much pleasure. i enjoy writing poetry of most kinds, rhyme - open verse - and often anything a.. more..

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