Freedom

This is one of the first pieces I ever wrote and still one of my favorites

 

when things get bad

and time goes by slow

there's a place in my head

where i always can go

i shut out the world

and drift away

in the this place of mine

where i always can stay

my back is hidden

under wings made to fly

they take me away

up and beyond the sky

nothing can get to me

all of the hurt is gone

i'll never fight another battle

because i've already won

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

there's a place in my head
where i always can go

Yes, a place like Dorothy searched for in the Wizard of Oz..."behind the moon, beyond the rain".

This is very beautifully written, very poignant yet very eloquently so...Great job!

[Jerri]

Very nice...there is aways a place one can run and hide.

[oranges_melt]

wow, I really like this. it sends out deep meaning. keep writing!