Captivated

Captivated

A Poem by she makes me weird
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another for ms. jenacini

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held for eternity in a twinkle of my thoughts...

the beauty of an angel...

the elegance of a pianist's hand...

the purity of a newborn...

entraped in bliss...

gazing into your soul...

i'm held captive by you

© 2008 she makes me weird


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Great play on words

Posted 16 Years Ago


How perfect you have described the love I feel..."i'm held captive by you"...how very true. Very beautifully written, visually stimulating, and stirring my emotions very strongly. Great job!


Posted 16 Years Ago



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she makes me weird
she makes me weird

the big one, TX



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I am simply me. I love life for the good and the bad. I write what I feel. So many aspects of life to be unturned and yet a little box to write about me... more..

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