mind f**k

this is written based on the feelings that a close friend described to me after she reunited with an old friend

you mind f**k me

the words you say

the tone of your voice

you're taken yet free

ah, what we could be

caressing my emotions

leading my thoughts

feeding my sexual desires

how do you do it?

tell me again how you touch yourself

let me describe how i see you

what i will do with you

how i will make you stutter

trying to caaaatch your breath

connecting the dots with your goosebumps

gently tracing them with the tip of my tongue

gently nibbling on your firm n*****s

hands resting on your waist

pulling your body into me

you can f**k me, but not my mind sweetheart

face to face

i can feel your warm breath on my lips

biting, teasing my lips with your mouth

smiling, you slowly kiss me from my mouth to my ear

tugging the lobe between your warm, full lips

i throw my head back in surrender

hand in hand, you pin me against the wall

i imagine you whispering in my ear

"i'm in love with her but i'd f**k you"

use me

tease me

but don't forget to please me

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

feeding my sexual desires
how do you do it?

Sensual, sexual, seductive - did I leave any of the really good S's out? You really mind fucked the reader with this very visual poem! Great job! Excellently written, letting me be right there with you, watching the whole thing! (Oops! Didn't mean to peek!)

[odhiambo]

alittle too steet but i love the attitude.i totally get it.good piece

[Niko Azazel]

this is cool i like it ^_^ you did an awesome job

[Egan]

Wooow.... this is amazing. I love how sensual it is. It makes me feel as if I am reading into someones soul of desires. I love this Great Job!!!!!

[emz]

Phheeewww.... lol... quite mind blowing... yet sad in a way.. like he wont let himself connect... quess we are all like that sometimes... inhibitions are best left free i think xx

[whispersoftly]

You can f**k me...but not my mind....Oh I got to remember that one hehe

Fantastic piece!!

[Kat Williams]

Did u talk to me?...lol

Fav line...just cause

"i'm in love with her but i'd f**k you"

[Seriana]

I LOVE it!! Bravo!! You know, I've had this very title in my head for months now, and every time I've tried to write it, it never comes out right. Now I don't need to. :) You did a FANTASTIC job!