To the Love I Cannot Yet See

My life has come,
Around, and around.
Missing you every time.
My soul it hears yours call my name,
But can't make sense of the sound.
The ocean fills the space between,
So time doesn't let our fate drown.
Please call my name just one more time,
I think I've found some ground.

My love, oh my love.
How I cannot wait to meet your lips.
How I cannot wait.

Reviews

[Blotted Ink Productions]

It's one of the worst feelings in the world, yet the best. Totally get it. Great job on this!

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

I love the concept here. I remember this feeling...The longing and unbearable waiting, yet the pleasant mystery of love not yet known. You crafted it and captured it so exceptionally well. Just brilliant! I love it.

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write, I too am in this boat! We gotta keep rowing if you will,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!