Words Pulse In Secret (A Collaboration)

entwined in whispers

beautiful

both in wishes

and want

thinking words

and

dreaming voices

tracing starlight twixt the globes

in a total expenditure

of hearts and haste

steeped in legend
lore
and blades not burdened
with hues of rust
but of other essences

sleek

like lovers

eyes

on the verge

red
between the lines
of blue

burning spaces

sparks of communication

dancing

in the cool night breeze

being always together

gracefully

gathered in this place of
cells and
symetric signals
vessels bound to burst
blushing
or broken

esoteric pulses flow freely

freed from meaning

limned with beauty

taste of your flesh

lover's ambrosia to my tongue

Author's Note

written with a good friend of mine.. who wants to stay unnamed for some bizarre reason.. lol

Reviews

[Gandré]

such a lyrical beauty here.. My favorite lines were
tracing starlight twixt the globes

in a total expenditure

of hearts ----------- such a vulnerable feeling, such a metaphor, oh!

The poem had a perfect beginning and ending with lover's ambrosia to my tongue - was very sensual, the food of Gods.. are all lovers not Gods? Is love not that what makes us feel alive? beautiful poem.

[Robin]

silly him ...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. This one is so sensual. My mind just floated away as I read it.
The ideas expressed here made life feel so small. Everything is on
such a grander scale, going beyond space and time. This one gave
me a warm feeling inside.

[bluessadmood]

This was so nice ..ohh how you give life and breath to every word,I have to read many times
and dream of them just like when you wrote them,tried to imagine your feelings when drawing this
strong picture..
entwined in whispers,between wishes and much thought of words,dreamy voices
we see the light through the stars,and expended hearts in haste,lovers eyes red
dancing in cool night breeze,freed from every meaning..taste of love I could feel
Ohh how many images ,its through so many planes,just loved your pictures
lovely write..